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Tempera
by Luca (Grade 1), Tanisha and Bailey (Grade 5 students)
Mount Royal/Virginia Park
Teachers: Kim Yamashita and Marcel Fafard (collaboration)
Fire
Fire is burning
In the night
I’m curled up good and tight.
Smoke so strong
I can’t breathe long.
Fire works extreme
better than a dream.
Ashes flutter, rise into the air
like a butterfly
without a care
by Samantha
Grade 5
Eastwood School
Teacher – Patti Lorentz
Very nice work Samantha;
Here are some comments from my students
Raven – I like the way you rhymed at the beginning
Myra- It rhymes to the end.
Sarah- I liek how you say “Ashes flutter, rise into the air like a butterfly”