Fire – Elementary – Page 13

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crayon rubbing and pencil

by Sidayon
Grade 6
Belmead School

Teacher: Mrs. Zimmer

Little dancers

Begin to move

Crackling popping

Sizzling music

Soon the sound starts to fade

Audience applause

Silent hush

Cool ashes

Little dancers come to rest.

by Sarah
Grade 5
Eastwood School

Teacher: Mrs. Patti Lorentz

1 02 2010: dennis sidayon (17:49:24) :

congrats my little KOBE!Im very proud what you did in school.thanks for your teacher and all of the staff of belmead.God Bless everybody!Papa will home soon.
3 02 2010: Ms. Wareing (10:10:18) :

Beautiful poem Sarah! Our class likes how you describe the fire from beginning to end. Well done.
11 02 2010: mommy, daddy and manang krit (20:01:38) :

congrtaz kuya! u made a great job. keep it up. we miss you so much. we are very proud of what u did.:)) that was one of a kind indeed. we love you
22 02 2010: Ms. Sachse-Brown (12:24:37) :

It is wonderful to see the mixed media work you are doing in your classroom. What were some of your thoughts when you were working on this piece? How did the fall colors help you to connect to the theme of fire? I hope to see more submissions from you in the future here!